posted by
benlehman at 03:39pm on 12/07/2008
Since there is so much discussion of it recently.
So, my people in Polaris are explicitly (rather than implicitly) white.
"The people that live in the memory of Polaris are tall, thin, and beautiful. Their hair is silver and gold and all the colors of the sky at night and their skin is so thin that you can see their pale blue veins beneath it."
Now, anyone who is white and reading this, please do me a favor and turn over your arm. Note that you can very clearly see the blue blood in your veins through your skin. It's a pretty standard trait of white people.
Nonetheless, almost everyone who has talked about these people with me makes the assumption that they are, you know, albino, or translucent, or in some other way super-white, or that they are magical elves (they are neither), or in some other way different in appearance from, you know, skinny northern Europeans.
I wonder if this is because whiteness is so much the assumed default that, if the writer takes the time to describe the skin of a character, that character must be divergent from the norm somehow.
Or it could just be that I'm an unclear writer.
So, my people in Polaris are explicitly (rather than implicitly) white.
"The people that live in the memory of Polaris are tall, thin, and beautiful. Their hair is silver and gold and all the colors of the sky at night and their skin is so thin that you can see their pale blue veins beneath it."
Now, anyone who is white and reading this, please do me a favor and turn over your arm. Note that you can very clearly see the blue blood in your veins through your skin. It's a pretty standard trait of white people.
Nonetheless, almost everyone who has talked about these people with me makes the assumption that they are, you know, albino, or translucent, or in some other way super-white, or that they are magical elves (they are neither), or in some other way different in appearance from, you know, skinny northern Europeans.
I wonder if this is because whiteness is so much the assumed default that, if the writer takes the time to describe the skin of a character, that character must be divergent from the norm somehow.
Or it could just be that I'm an unclear writer.
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The only thing that creepy I've picked up in Bliss Stage is a loli Sara Smith.
(Runs)
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And Sara's like what, 13?
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"Every book is three books, after all: the one the writer intended, the one the reader expected, and the one that casts its shadow when the first two meet by moonlight." -- John M. Ford, Rules of Engagement
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Let's just face it... Bliss Stage is a squick factory.
Although I love it if only for this conversation with my friend Andrea, regarding two very close male teachers of mine.
Me: "So that would put them at Intimacy 4?"
Andrea: "For being pantsless? At least."
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"The only thing that creepy that I've picked up in Bliss Stage was a loli Sarah Smith."
Read as
"It's creepy that I've gone out with a 13 year old in character while playing Bliss Stage."
Double entendre on 'picked up.'
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After all, they could have darker skin so thin you can see the veins beneath it. And/Or their veins could be a bit more prominently blue.
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I'll admit to examining the veins in my wrist as soon as I read that and going "...whaddaya know."
Oh yeah... did you ever get around to playtesting That Thing I sent you?
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But I didn't go as far as albino space pixies.
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Y'all pale whities to me. Except those of you who aren't.
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B) From that sentence alone about hair, I would assume that the character's hair could be both shades of dark blue and silver regardless of age, for the same reasons stated above.
Note that that's reading within the context of making crazy ice world fantasy make sense, as opposed to reading it in the context of a discussion about RPGs and race, which my response would probably be "HAR! He's talkin' about us whiteys!"
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"The people that live in the memory of Polaris are tall, thin, and beautiful. Their hair is silver, or gold, or any of the colors of the sky at night; and their skin is so pale that you can sometimes see their pale blue veins beneath it."
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...It does seem better to me.
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In the same way that your writing makes Polaris seem like more than an opulent city. In the same way that your writing makes the Mistake seem like more than a demon invasion brought on by sin.
The people of Polaris read as being hyper-white. I imagine them looking similar to the elves in the LotR movies.
Which isn't to say I don't see them as white, or human. I do. Just a hyper-embellished version thereof.
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Based on the replies so far, I'd say yeah.
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I've found that, when I ask someone to do art for me, for like a fic or a game or something, I tend to explicitly mention descriptive skin tones. I take the time to say "Skin Tone: Pale Pink," "Skin Tone: Ruddy Pink" and the like. This is partially because I find that doing so to describe a white guy is absolutely unneeded, which I find a little creepy. Partially because "White Guy" could be any number of skin tones. (Sigh.)