Thoughts
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This is a novel of adolescence, in more ways than can be counted, but the primary one is this: The basic premise of the novel exists only in the moral vacuum created by the destruction of an authority figure. In that regard, he must remain a total moral neutral until his bones are nurtured by starvation and stone and he can emerge into understanding of her basic weakness. Once he has turned away, he has made his first choice, and the remainder of the fall and the fallen are an outgrowth of that and that alone. She (other she) cannot make this choice for him, he needs to start making decisions and emerge as a justified yet amoral being and it is at that time, and only that time, that his dreams can convey to him the nature of his amorality and crush him like so much between stones. In that light, the entire end of things might be changed, and the character that she is will become very different, but this is fine because it is where I am going.
He needs to give up on answers before he starts looking for them again. The nature of despair is cannibalism. Go.
This is a novel of adolescence, in more ways than can be counted, but the primary one is this: The basic premise of the novel exists only in the moral vacuum created by the destruction of an authority figure. In that regard, he must remain a total moral neutral until his bones are nurtured by starvation and stone and he can emerge into understanding of her basic weakness. Once he has turned away, he has made his first choice, and the remainder of the fall and the fallen are an outgrowth of that and that alone. She (other she) cannot make this choice for him, he needs to start making decisions and emerge as a justified yet amoral being and it is at that time, and only that time, that his dreams can convey to him the nature of his amorality and crush him like so much between stones. In that light, the entire end of things might be changed, and the character that she is will become very different, but this is fine because it is where I am going.
He needs to give up on answers before he starts looking for them again. The nature of despair is cannibalism. Go.
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It is clear that the masses are confused by this.
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(but rather because the author lacked notepaper at the time.)
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--Ben